Oct13

Cold

Posted on October 13, 2015 by Nadine

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You say I’m cold and don’t have a heart

It’s hard for me to feel the warmth

When I’ve been in the cold for longtime

You see I’ve experienced heartbreak and pain

And I’ve watched everything fall into the abyss

I’ve used up my love, energy, and hope on another love

And now I don’t have the strength to fight or move

So I’m stuck outside in the cold with my frozen heart

Waiting for your warmth to rescue me

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Vibrant on October 15, 2015 at 2:59 pm said:

OK I am here to rescue you 😛

Why did you put so much effort into creating a heart of words?

If you planned on writing it up in plain?

I mean, it might have been difficult for your readers ( I did try to read couple of lines, inside the heart!)

But since you created a heart of words…how did you create it? Must be difficult?

Thanks for sharing this!

Love and light ❤

Anand 🙂

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- Nadine on October 15, 2015 at 8:35 pm said:
  
  Ok just bring a blanket and hot chocolate 😀
  Oh this assignment for writing 201=)
  Yes i thought some people will have difficulty reading it, plus if you notice the poem is incomplete in the heart shape
  Oh no i just created it using this website i didn’t do anything http://www.imagechef.com/ic/poem/ there are other shapes as well, and you can use background picture
  and there is also this link from the same site http://www.imagechef.com/ic/blender/ (but I haven’t tried it yet)
  You should go to this site and try some ideas, you are better than me in computer field 😀
  
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  - Vibrant on October 16, 2015 at 5:27 am said:
    
    Oh why thank you for the compliment, though I don’t deserve it–I am not going to use that resource any soon but I heartily thank you for sharing your secrets anyway.
    
    I am glad you are enjoying POetry 201
    
    I wish you very best.
    
    Love and light ❤
    
    Anand 🙂
    
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  - Nadine on October 16, 2015 at 6:16 pm said:
    
    You’re welcome =) gosh you’re lazier than I am
    Yes and today was the last day in it =( for the first time I completed all the assignments (with bit of breaking the rules :D)
    Thank you wish you the same ❤
    
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  - Vibrant on October 16, 2015 at 6:18 pm said:
    
    Yes, now we know each other better LOL 😀
    
    By the time you reply to my comments I forget the threads ( So most of the time I am replying based on guess work and see how nicely it works LOL :D)
    
    The trick is to be funny and sweet every time LOL 😀
    
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  - Nadine on October 17, 2015 at 9:02 am said:
    
    yes you’re helping me discover your weaknesses 😀 😀
    Well the trick is working well for you 😀 my comment page is chaotic wordpress must really hates me =( I receive late notifications about new comments
    
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  - Vibrant on October 17, 2015 at 3:17 pm said:
    
    Oh really? So you are playing strategic games my queen? 😛 LOL I thought we were friends LOL 😀
    
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  - Nadine on October 18, 2015 at 8:32 pm said:
    
    Friends?!! The first lesson that they teach us the royalties is: no one is your friend, everyone can be a threat for your precious throne
    
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  - Vibrant on October 19, 2015 at 4:43 am said:
    
    Huh? OK. Where do you take those lessons?
    
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  - Nadine on October 19, 2015 at 5:57 pm said:
    
    Why are you asking? what are your hidden motives? 😐 I knew it you want to overthrow me 😐
    
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Melinda Kucsera on October 15, 2015 at 3:00 pm said:

Very creative presentation! How’d you get it into a heart shape?

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- Nadine on October 15, 2015 at 8:31 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Melinda =) Oh I just used this site: http://www.imagechef.com/ic/poem/ there are other shapes as well, and you can use background picture
  and there is also this link from the same site http://www.imagechef.com/ic/blender/ (I haven’t tried it yet)
  
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  - Melinda Kucsera on October 15, 2015 at 8:33 pm said:
    
    ooo thank you for providing a new digital toy for me to play with! 🙂
    
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  - Nadine on October 16, 2015 at 6:05 pm said:
    
    You’re welcome =) hope you enjoy it
    
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Majka on October 15, 2015 at 3:01 pm said:

Very nice, enjoyed it!
Blessings!

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- Nadine on October 15, 2015 at 8:28 pm said:
  
  Thank you for reading ❤
  
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jacquelineobyikocha on October 15, 2015 at 3:20 pm said:

Well, your heart looks lovely to me. Great job 🙂

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- Nadine on October 15, 2015 at 8:27 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much Jackie ❤
  
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  - jacquelineobyikocha on October 16, 2015 at 9:23 am said:
    
    You are welcome dear Nadine 🙂
    
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Opher on October 15, 2015 at 3:27 pm said:

I love this – what a great idea! Brilliant.

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- Nadine on October 15, 2015 at 8:27 pm said:
  
  Thank you much appreciated it ❤
  
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Deanne on October 15, 2015 at 4:09 pm said:

I love this 💕💕💕💕💕 it remind me of someone. I know he needs be but he can be so cold at times it scares me away

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- Nadine on October 15, 2015 at 8:26 pm said:
  
  Thank you dear ❤
  Sometimes past bad love relationships can turn us into cruel cold monster
  
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writersdream9 on October 15, 2015 at 4:56 pm said:

I can really feel this!

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- Nadine on October 15, 2015 at 8:25 pm said:
  
  Sorry =(
  
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Imran Ali on October 15, 2015 at 6:49 pm said:

There are all kinds of ways for a relationship to be tested, even broken, some, irrevocably; it’s the endings we’re unprepared for.

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- Nadine on October 15, 2015 at 8:24 pm said:
  
  Exactly!! I think because of our past experience we are afraid of the ending not knowing how this will end up so we hold back
  
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Spiritdancing on October 15, 2015 at 9:31 pm said:

Everything is better with chocolate on it…giggles

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- Nadine on October 16, 2015 at 6:06 pm said:
  
  Indeed ❤ and life full of rainbows after eating chocolate
  
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Kathy on October 15, 2015 at 9:50 pm said:

Well done. Reminds me of Jar of Hearts by Christina Perri – “You’re gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul.”

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- Nadine on October 16, 2015 at 6:09 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much Kathy ❤ Yes I know the song, it's a beautiful song about someone being crushed over by the heartbreak
  
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